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Then
enter the Secret Attic Short Story Competition!
Each month you can submit an entry that will be passed
onto our judges who will pick the best and award a winner. During some
months the subject matter will be a 'free for all', where you can write
anything you like, other months will have a specific theme.
Previous Competition
Winners
February 2005 David Willshaw
April 2005 Christine
Sutton
May
2005 George L Darley
July
2005 Robyn O'Hara
August
2005 Richard Adamski
September 2005
Hannah Southgate
October
2005 Heather Parker
December
2005 Feathers by Bob Lakin
January
2006 RD Larson
February
2006 Debra Spiller
March
2006 Nethi Sette
April
2006
Joe Louis
May
2006 Kim Montgomery
Love
of Literature by Raymond Hopkins, Kronoby, Finland
Missing by Debra Spiller, Kent, UK
Diary of a Ghost by Suzanne Ralphson, Leicester, UK
Shreds of Love by Irene Edwards, Angus, UK
Lip Service by Will Orr-Ewing, London, UK
Red by Gary Campbell, Mount Gambier, Australia
Leaving The City In Ruins. by Trevor Nicholl, Manchester, UK
One For The Watercooler by Simon Maltz, London, UK
My Own Personal Time Machine by David Darlington, Guernsey, Channel
Islands, UK
Women and Me and My Mate Jamie by David Darlington, Guernsey, Channel
Islands, UK
Collecting Footsteps by Annemaria Cooper, Glasgow, UK
The Burning Tree by Daniel Michael Manning, Bath, UK
As Still as Statues by Patrick Johnson, London, UK
The Bonestripper's Bait by Ben Schroeder, Melbourne, Australia
Apple Juice by Raymond Hopkins, Kronoby, Finland
A Matter of Energy by Asher Wismer, North Wayne, Maine, USA
Dying to be thin by Emily Clift, Atherton, UK
An implement's tale by Mike Day, Hoxne, UK
Nineteen thirty, I was brand new, and a present for a young lad called
Sam Herrick. Forged steel fingers, a stout ash shank and a smooth beech
handle. For a young lad, apprenticed to the head gardener at Herbrook
Manor, a fine new garden fork was an excellent gift on his ninth birthday.
I spent a lot of those early years shifting great clumps of manure
and compost from one place to another. Sam learnt to keep the glasshouses
warm with fresh manure for the marrows and the like.
Then, a few seasons later, when his hands had grow hard calluses, and
my handle had smooth patches to match, we moved on to lifting vegetables
and digging in the same compost and manure into the long beds in the
walled garden.
Time moves on as the sun swings by and the trees around the garden
wall grow taller. One day, after Sam had been strangely absent for
two whole days he came back whistling. The odd thing was that where
his left hand always held me, as we lifted a load, there was a hard
lump.
The gaffer came up to him and they stood talking, Sam was leaning on
me, resting his back.
‘
Seeing as your a married man now, with responsibilities, I suppose
we can let you have a shilling a week extra.’ The Gaffer said.
‘
Thank you sir.’ He mumbled.
To me he sounded sort of pleased and embarrassed. Still after that,
we set too with extra vigor.
A few seasons later all the men could talk about was whether there
would be war. Some of the youngsters, Sam included, said they could
start if they liked, we would give them a black eye, just like before.
They sounded excited, sensing a great adventure was about to start.
Some of the men, the older voices, said that it would be a tragedy.
They in their turn sounded sad and ill at ease. Talking about places
like, Passiondale and the Somme. I do not think they were nearby, no
one had ever talked about them before.
Then one day Sam was saying goodbye to the Gaffer.
The Gaffer was wishing him luck. He sounded sadder than I had ever
heard him.
My lad took me away from the garden, down the lane on his bike, to
a little cottage .
A woman, he called he Sweet heart, met him at the gate. I could hear
the tears in her voice. ‘You need to stay here and look after
Harry and Me.’ she said.
‘
You know I don’t have any choice. You saw the call up papers,
same as I did.' Sam said as he lent me against the garden wall, ‘I
brought my old fork home, perhaps you could grow a few vegetables while
I’m away, sort of add to your supplies if things get a bit short.’
‘
You won’t be gone that long; they say it will be over by Christmas.’
‘
I hope so.’ He said as they left me and walked in side.
She had slim soft hand, and the work was slow; she cried when my handle
blistered her skin. If I could, I would have done it all without her.
But she carried on and the blisters turned hard as we lifted first
the flowerbeds and then the lawn.
I lifted six crops of potatoes with Sweet heart. She always kept me
clean, never let Harry play with me and together we waited for him.
A month after the big party, when everyone seemed to be happy, Sam
came home. I did not mind sitting in the shed, warm amongst the old
sacks, flowerpots and mice. I knew that the seasons would turn and
Sam would need me once again.
And that is how it was, one morning the door opened and his familiar
hand lifted me out of disuse. We toiled every evening in Sweet hearts
garden. He would catch a bus in the morning to somewhere, but when
he came back we would begin.
He re-laid much of the lawn over the years; Harry had the job of pushing
my fingers into the turf to aerate it, and helped Sam with the vegetable
patch.
Young Harry had less and less time as he grew up, I suppose he had
other places he had to dig. He still came around from time to time,
and we lifted some of the heavy things for his Dad.
I heard Harry, with a voice just like his mothers, telling a little
girl called Jessica to leave Granddads fork alone.
Another time, I heard Sam crying on the garden bench, whilst a crowd
of people dressed in black walked all over his beautiful lawn. I think
Sweet heart must have gone away. She had stopped using me years before,
but now I didn’t hear her voice. Only Sam, talking to her as
he worked, he seemed to.
I stayed out last night, which I never do, I have my own place in the
shed. However, the sun is warm and I am in a lovely spot, here amongst
the vegetables and flowers. That cheeky robin keeps using me for his
perch; I do not really mind, his feet hardly tickle.
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