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you have what it takes?
Want to get some practice?
Just need an excuse to put pen to paper?
Then
enter the Secret Attic Short Story Competition!
Each month you can submit an entry that will be passed
onto our judges who will pick the best and award a winner. During some
months the subject matter will be a 'free for all', where you can write
anything you like, other months will have a specific theme.
Previous Competition
Winners
February 2005 David Willshaw
April 2005 Christine
Sutton
May
2005 George L Darley
July
2005 Robyn O'Hara
August
2005 Richard Adamski
September 2005
Hannah Southgate
October
2005 Heather Parker
December
2005 Feathers by Bob Lakin
January
2006 RD Larson
February
2006 Debra Spiller
March
2006 Nethi Sette
April
2006
Joe Louis
May
2006 Kim Montgomery
Love
of Literature by Raymond Hopkins, Kronoby, Finland
Missing by Debra Spiller, Kent, UK
Diary of a Ghost by Suzanne Ralphson, Leicester, UK
Shreds of Love by Irene Edwards, Angus, UK
Lip Service by Will Orr-Ewing, London, UK
Red by Gary Campbell, Mount Gambier, Australia
Leaving The City In Ruins. by Trevor Nicholl, Manchester, UK
One For The Watercooler by Simon Maltz, London, UK
My Own Personal Time Machine by David Darlington, Guernsey, Channel
Islands, UK
Women and Me and My Mate Jamie by David Darlington, Guernsey, Channel
Islands, UK
Collecting Footsteps by Annemaria Cooper, Glasgow, UK
Overhead, the sun baked the earth, and sucked life from the trickling
river to clouds, to weep, on distant hills. People sheltered in the
shadows, resting, thirsty, without hope. The rains did not bless the
land, and the muddy riverbank hardened like stone. Cassie sat, wings
folded around her, waiting for the last sparkle to leave a footprint
at the edge of a dying river. This would be Cassie's last time on earth
collecting footsteps. This time, she hoped to witness a miracle. She
offered hope, and comfort, but miracles… are not the creation
of angels, for they birth in man’s heart.
Cassie watched the last water droplet, which sparkled from a small
footstep, evaporate, and reached out to catch it with her hand. Its
purpose and its journey belonged to Nawaka, Swahili for beautiful,
but Nawaka was no beauty. Small for her age of six years, her belly
protruded through thin rags, and she walked unsteadily on spindly legs
around the dead body of her mother. People walked past, absorbed in
their own grief, their own plight. Too tired to wail, too tired to
care. In the hills, were the water flowed, war raged on in bloody conflict,
and help lay far beyond the plateau of death.
Cassie followed Nawaka’s steps back to a village near the base
of the mountains, for angels follow in our footsteps, even those swept
away on dusty fields. Only vultures lived in Nawaka’s village,
picking sun-bleached bones for shreds of meat. The huge birds cared
little if their meal was cow, or the flesh of a child, they too, had
to survive in this hostile land. The false hope of water shimmered
above the blood-red dust, and the hot wind whipped tiny tornados inside
abandoned huts.
On the floor of Nawaka’s hut, a small sandal lay near a cooking
pot. It belonged to Nawaka; it had fallen from her foot as she and
her mother fled when the soldiers attacked. Cassie touched it with
her finger, and saw the man who made it - Nawaka’s father. The
small leather shoe held a bond that Cassie could follow. Minyi, Nawaka’s
father, was squatting by a deep lake of crystal water, polishing his
rifle with a rag, his goatskin water bottle lying atop a wide dam of
stones and mud. The reduced flow of water escaped to the thirsty plateau
below where the sun waited to quench it’s own thirst.
'Minyi,’ called a voice.
Minyi looked up to see his brother.
‘
You did well today. Without water, the men who attack our homes will
give up,’ said his brother.
‘
Yes, I built a strong dam to protect my family,’ said Minyi,
proudly.
His brother said nothing, for he knew many villages lay destroyed including
Minyi’s. He handed Minyi a bag of grain. ‘Your payment.’
Minyi smiled, and hurried home to feed his family.
Cassie followed Minyi’s journey, for Nakawa, like her sandal,
needed to be found. At his village, Minyi stood holding his child’s
sandal, and wept, then he hurried to the next village. It was dusk
by the time he reached it, and he searched in vain through the corpses
for his family. Trucks of soldiers trundled past, and his brother,
who had paid him earlier in the day, stopped.
‘
Minyi, come with us. There is nothing here for you now. Come, join
us and avenge your family. We will kill them all.’
Minyi walked forward to hand his gun, and the bag of grain back to
his brother. Cassie waited for his reply. ‘No, my family are
lost somewhere. I must find them before the vultures pick their bones.
Fighting did this, I will not fight again.’ Minyi pointed to
the death and destruction around him.
Cassie smiled, and wrapped her wings around him.
With hope in his heart Minyi headed to the dried riverflats for Cassie
now guided him in Nawaka’s footsteps, and found his child still
clinging to her mother as dawn peeked over the mountains. She drank
from his water bottle, and hugged him tightly.
‘
Did you kill the bad men, Papa?’ she asked, as Minyi tied the
sandal to her foot.
He lifted her up in his arms. ‘No Nawaka, those men fight because,
like you, they thirst.’
The ground was hard, and Minyi had nothing to dig a grave. Instead,
he buried his wife beneath a pile of bedrock stone, and walked with
Nawaka to the distant pale, blue mountains. There, he sat Nawaka by
the lake, and ripped the stones and mud from his dam. ‘There
Nawaka, the plateau will drink again, even our enemies.’ The
weight of water forced through the gap he made, and the dam collapsed
to thunder in white cascades to revive the artery of life.
‘
Papa, what if the bad men come back,’ said Nawaka. Cassie enclosed
her arms around her. ‘I don’t want to lose you ever again.’
‘
You will never lose me again, Nawaka. My hand made your sandals, I
followed your steps and found you, but now, you will follow mine over
the mountain. On the other side of this mountain, strangers wait to
help us,’ said Minyi.
Cassie entered both their hearts with hope, and Minyi lead his young
daughter safely over the mountain. Minyi knew where the soldiers hid
to stop his people deserting their homes, and took the higher, rugged
path. Each step along up the narrow, brittle rock, stole their breath
in the thin, hot air. Nawaka was too tired to climb, hunger clawed
at her muscles, but Minyi walked for her. Carrying her frail body on
his shoulders, he dragged each foot until at last he entered the gates
of the white tented village on the other side of the mountain.
In the small refugee camp, strangers with love, not revenge, fed Nawaka
- her skin glowed, and flesh padded her bones. Minyi knew the camp
was not enough, others like his own child had not found their parents.
The other children played with Nawaka as soon as she well enough to
join. Minyi dug holes for the children who did not get well, for at
least in this encampment they had shovels. He worked to build shelters
and a school, and on every day he had to dig a grave, he dug a well,
but the wells remained dry.
The time had come for Cassie to leave, and she blew Nawaka’s
sparkle from her hand where it landed in one of Minyi’s dry wells.
Water bubbled through the surface, red and frothy, then gushed with
a white foam to fill the hole with clean water. Cheers sang throughout
the camp, but Minyi did not celebrate, instead he picked up his shovel.
‘
Papa, you found water. Why are you digging more holes?’ asked
Nawaka.
‘
It is better to fight with a shovel, than a rifle, Nawaka,’ he
said. ‘I am but one man, but people will live because I dig holes.
I would rather dig for water, than dig a grave.
Cassie smiled, her last assignment was a journey of footsteps that
created a miracle for so many to share.
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